ok, I checked the game and here are SOME impressions
as mentioned, Egypt has but one choice and must attack Israel, that must be changed.
Actually, you have a lot of work to go.
Iran is in a similar position
You have too few sea zones, you need more neutrals spaced better
Arabia should be brought more into play
and one bad map mistake, Cyprus simply can not exist in the middle of another space. you need at least two spaces adjacent to any other and even then, I would recommend at least 3. Cyprus simply can not stay like it is, that is completely unplayable.
But while I sound negative (yeah, it is) this takes time and honestly, I know of many attempts at a Mideast variant and never saw a good one yet. The region is difficult, fleets are tough to make important and it becomes too army dependent ...maybe use an airforce unit in some way? Air power in the Mideast is huge. Rules changes such as air power and maybe even missile power?
Keep plugging away!!!